仿 Pie Corbett 先生詩作一首

偶見 Pie Corbett 先生詩作，在下亦試以其格式仿作一首以自娛：

My secret is made of-

the knowledge of the sky,

the soul within your eyes,

based on the very value inside our heart and mind,

the joy from my learning,

the hope from my dreaming,

the wisdom from my thinking,

whether I do live or die.

獻醜，幸勿見笑。茲附 Pie Corbett 先生原作如下：

My Secret Poem

My secret is made of-

the fingertips of clouds,

the silence between heartbeats,

found at hospital bedside,

the hangman's gloves,

the stoat's bright eye,

the bullet as it slices,

through the winter wind.

謝！